Hide and Seek poem - Call out, call loud
WALT: To identify how authors use descriptive and figurative language to convey a message
For this activity I read a poem then I recorded by self reading a part of the poem. Here is the recording and the drawing.
Hey Ange Billie here.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOUR POEM!Your artistic flair is really showing.My heart was beating all though your poem.It sounding almost like a horror movie about hide and seek! I also like how you put both version,The one when you read the poem and anther one where it the google drawing.
Ka Pai To mahi!
yours truly,
Billie.
Kia ora Angelina,
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Great work with your poem. I think you have done a great job of using poetic language features such as adjectives (salty dark) to add mood to your poem. DO you enjoy poetry? It was a really good idea to record yourself reading your poem. I like the way you chose a different way to present your poem.
Looking forward to seeing you again soon!
Mrs Gully
Kia ora Angelina, Your use of descriptive language painted such vivid picture of hide and seek! The backgrond image is very effective to your format too. I like voice recording as it adds interest and you spoke clearly at a suitable pace. Ka pai .
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