Perfect Paragraph
This week for writing we had to write a paragraph about A country I would like to visit, A gift you would like to receive, A skill you would like to master, A movie you have enjoyed. I choose to to do a country I would like to visit.
Here is what I wrote -
If I could got to any country in the world, I would go to Mexico. I would go to Mexico because they play loud music you can dance to, I would love to dance around in the sun all day long. They also have delicious food including my favourite, nachos. Mexico is also so bright and colour, it makes you smile just to be there. Music, dancing, food and bright colour are the reason why I want to go to Mexico.
Hello Angelina,
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sione and I attend St Pius x catholic school.I really like your writing about going to mexico.Keep up the good work.
Best wishes.
Kia ora Angelina, You have written an effective paragraph about Mexico which summarises clearly your reasons for wanting to visit this country. I agree with all of your your reasons! I would also love to see a festival or carnival! The pinata we often see at NZ parties now originated in Mexico. The colourful image you included is a prefect match for your writing.
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