Instruction's on how to make a smoothie!!! 😋🍹
For the past couple weeks we have been learning how to write instruction's. This week we had to write instruction's on how to make a smoothie. In my smoothie I have weet-bix, fruit, yogurt and milk. Here are my instruction on how to make a weet-bix smoothie -
Kia Ora Angelina, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this! The way you have formatted this with tons of different colours really draws me in, keep it up.
It is very good you have made this to fit your personality as it is a key thing with blog posts.
To improve all I can say is, maybe add what you could do to improve. Apart from that awesome post & keep up the great work. Also, does this taste nice? I'll be sure to try it.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Kia ora, I,m Max from Yaldhurst Model School. I enjoyed the part when you told poeple how to make smoothies becaause I did not know. Did you think about telling us your favourite falvour because I do not know. Maybe you could tell us which ones you like. Where did you geyt the idea from. Goodbye from Max.
ReplyDeleteHi Angelina! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. WOW! First of all your title really caught my eye so that's why I clicked on it and you blog is as just as good as your title, so great work!
ReplyDeleteI remember a time when we did this masterchef cooking thing back when I was a year four, and I remember clearly the really good smoothie one of the groups made.
To improve your already great blog post you could add in your experience on it, so you could give tips or something like that.
How long does it take to make? (I'm sure it's something like 2 minutes or something right?)
Awesome!
Mia
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ReplyDeleteKonnichiwa Angelina. Reagan here!
ReplyDeleteThis smoothie sounds very appetizing!
I really like how you have added colour to brighten the post and have add some little emojis in the title to catch the reader's eye.
I also liked how you have presented it on a slide and made your instructions and equipment very clear.
This reminded me of when our class had to write instructions for a sandwich and a potion. Have you written any other instructions other than the smoothie?
Noho ora mai,
Reagan
Hi Angelina!
ReplyDeleteI'm Mika, a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School.
Wow are you popular. I only get one comment and they're all from dad. Your slide is eye catching, short and sweet. Ha ha, get it? Because smoothies are sweet...
Your blog is eye catching and colourful, but next time you can write down your experience while making this. That's pretty much it. It's already a really good blog post.
What's your favourite smoothy flavour. Mine is strawberry. Even better if the strawberries were from Mum's garden. Hope to see a reply and bye!