Hide and Seek Writing
For this activity we had to writ about a time we played hide in go seek of spotlight. I choose a game of hide in go seek I play a few years ago.
Hiding in the cupboard
1,2,3 I run around the house trying to find a place to hide. I see the wooden cupboard standing next to the table. I run to it and climb inside, shutting the door as quietly as I can. It is dark and gloomy, I move the bed sheets around so I am sitting comfortably on them. The only thing I can see is the light shining through the cracks of the closed door. I take a deep breath trying not to cough or sneeze from all of the dust. 29, 30 ready or not here I come. Declan rushes around the house like he is trying to outrun a lion. I hear him walking closer to me. I hold my breath and close my eyes trying not to make a peep. I open my eyes and see his shadow slowly stepping around the front of the cupboard. I wait, then I hear Declan calling out, he wants me to do a squeak so he can find me. I sit silently in the dark making no noise. I accidentally hit a torch off a pile of sheets, it makes a loud noise. I hear Declan’s footsteps walking straight towards me. I see Declan’s shadow, then the door opening. He looks up to the top shelf. I close my eyes, then I hear him call. Found you! I climb out of the cupboard. I have won! I was the last to be found.
I have won!
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ReplyDeleteHi Angelina
ReplyDeleteWhat a great description of game of hide and seek in your household. I could see Declan in my head running about like he was the prey of a lion.
Keep up the great work.
Tineka
Hi Angelina! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. Awesome work! That was really good! I loved the tension, and your descriptive language.
ReplyDeleteI remember playing spotlight at living springs for camp, and me and some of my friends hid behind the stairs, nobody found us for a while, but it was really cramped. Since living springs is so quiet and dark, it had this eerie feeling and I was very nervous of getting found. Do you like playing spotlight? Why?
To improve, maybe you could put this piece of writing into a drawing, or something creative! Like Canva or something else you can think of.
Great work!
Mia