Friday, 16 June 2017

My Description of Halga Reissman

Here is my Description of Helga Reissman.

Once there was a tall person called Helga Reissman and she was 50 years old , her eyes are as blue and clear as ice. Her hair is like a bundle of hay and has bits of brown hair as brown as chocolate.


She wears cool long tops, also she has light brown high heel boots I think that the colour looks like cow poo.


She wears glass when she reads, but when she does not reading she wears the glass on her head and the same pants every day.  



On her right ear she has a creepy silver earring that sticks right throw the top of her ear.
Helga Reissman is a tin person and her face is oval.

Helga Reissman works in a school in Greymouth called Grey Main School. She work in Mamaku 1. She had to move away from family to work here. She is missing her daughters , Husband and her dog Millie. She is living with her sister while she works here.

She teaches the higher group in maths and writing. She works in digital school with everyone having a Chromebook of there own and they do everything on the Chromebooks.

By Angelina Robinson.









3 comments:

  1. Hi Angelina, I enjoyed reading your description of Miss Reissmann. It is great to see you experimenting with simile to add interest. Next time you could add some information about your character's personality to make her come to life.

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  2. wow Angelina, you really had me thinking you had copied this from a book you had read. that is until I got to the bit about her being a teacher at the school Awesome Work!! love Grandma

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  3. Well what a great teacher Miss Reissmann sounds like, its sad that she is missing her family. Well done Angelina. Love Nana.

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