Kia Ora Angelina! My name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model.
This is an excellent blog post. It is great that you gave some context so we knew what you were doing. Having this DLO in your post is a major part in a good blog post. Ka Pai!
This reminds me of our school values (HERO), when we made signs to show what we should like in class and out of class.
To improve, maybe put what you are proud about and your thoughts and feelings on your post. Apart from that, this was amazing!
Did you enjoy this? Do you do everything on that D.L.0?
Hi Angelina! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your blog post! you poster was really eye-catching and you have a lot of good points in there. I also love your use of pictures and text.
This reminds me of when we were asked to a poster or some of kind of DLO (digital learning object) to explain our HERO values, which are Healthy individuals, Enthusiastic Learners, Responsible citizens and Open-minded explorers. Do you have some values at your school like this?
To improve, I think you should give something other than google drawings a go, there are some awesome sites out there that can make really cool posters like Canva, Postermywall, Visme and a whole lot more!
P.S. I saw your comment on my blog, thank you very much. Awesome work! Mia
Kia Ora Angelina!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model.
This is an excellent blog post. It is great that you gave some context so we knew what you were doing. Having this DLO in your post is a major part in a good blog post. Ka Pai!
This reminds me of our school values (HERO), when we made signs to show what we should like in class and out of class.
To improve, maybe put what you are proud about and your thoughts and feelings on your post. Apart from that, this was amazing!
Did you enjoy this? Do you do everything on that D.L.0?
Nga Mihi,
- Julia
Hi Angelina! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I really like your blog post! you poster was really eye-catching and you have a lot of good points in there. I also love your use of pictures and text.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of when we were asked to a poster or some of kind of DLO (digital learning object) to explain our HERO values, which are Healthy individuals, Enthusiastic Learners, Responsible citizens and Open-minded explorers. Do you have some values at your school like this?
To improve, I think you should give something other than google drawings a go, there are some awesome sites out there that can make really cool posters like Canva, Postermywall, Visme and a whole lot more!
P.S. I saw your comment on my blog, thank you very much.
Awesome work!
Mia
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