Kia Ora Angelina, my name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
This is amazing! I love how you have added a pop of colour. All of your words are very clear & it was very easy to read. Not to mention interesting!
It is great that you added this D.L.O (Digital Learning Object), as it provides us with information shared in a creative way. It gives us a side of your personality.
To improve, all I can say is, maybe next time you could add some more context. You could also maybe add your thoughts & feelings. Apart from that, it was great.
Did you learn any other phrases? Was it fun doing this?
Kia Ora Angelina,
ReplyDeletemy name is Julia and I am a year 8 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
This is amazing! I love how you have added a pop of colour. All of your words are very clear & it was very easy to read. Not to mention interesting!
It is great that you added this D.L.O (Digital Learning Object), as it provides us with information shared in a creative way. It gives us a side of your personality.
To improve, all I can say is, maybe next time you could add some more context. You could also maybe add your thoughts & feelings. Apart from that, it was great.
Did you learn any other phrases? Was it fun doing this?
Yours Sincerely,
Julia