This week we have been learning to make our writing more Descriptive to make it interesting for people to read. One of the activities were Mrs P gave us a starter sentence and we got into groups of 4 and made it better by adding and taking away words.
Here is one of my sentences
Look at Those amazing beautiful flowers they are sticky and sweet with nectar.
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